First plot idea

First plot idea
1) The first idea we have come up with is situated in a forest and a childrens playground and will be edited together through parallel editing. In the forest we will have a worried looking man running down a path surrounded by trees. He will keep looking behind him to see if he is being followed and we will insert prerecorded sound of heavy breathing to emphasize his panic and hurry. In the playground there will be a sinister looking character dressed in all black, starting far away from the camera but as each shot cuts back to the play ground he will appear closer and closer. At their meeting point they will come face to face as the man appears out of the forest. A straight cut shot will make the sinister looking man disappear and the other character will look very stressed and unsettled. The screen will cut black and the audience will hear a scream. The final shot will be a close up of the sinister mans face as he smiles then the screen cuts black and the titles appear.

Audience feedback 
By discussing our ideas with peers, family and teachers we decided that we wern't going to use this idea as it was too standard and predictable and we wanted to develop a more unique and effective idea. We therefore took ideas from this, such as a sinister looking main character and possibly a parallel timeline and decided we would incorporate this into our main idea and plot but that this plot wouldn't be used for our thriller.